I liked this poem. I like how you convey the sword as an extention of the fire within him and vice versa. And then there's the impenetrable armor, both in a physical sense as well as an emotional sense, cuz this is definately a guy who is dedicated to his work and knows the difference between these things. So, basically you describe things really well for your audience to get all that. keep 'em coming!
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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