That has to be the greatest story I've ever read. I'm not talking about only the fan fics, but of any story. I thought it was funny as hell. I loved every minute of it. You made the characters so lively, and were so creative with the diolauge. The ending was awesome, and I loved the way you were able to put so many members into the story, without cluttering it and making it sound unrealistic. The story had a lot of cool twists, exspecially the part where Fortune gets sick off of the fish. And the members of the jury were real cool too.
I'm so glad that I had the honer to be a part of the story, but I'm sure that Hadoken wasn't to happy about how I handled things. You have a great talent with writing, and the way you make everything fit so perfectly, no matter how wierd, was very commendable.
I hope you write more, maybe a spin offf from this one, like what happens after the trial.
Anyway, this post is getting too long, all in all, great job. Truely, great job!
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