Is that constructive criticism? I'm just curious. I've never been told whatever it is you are saying in those words before. My poem is too "manic"? I'm just curious whether it's constructive criticism or the other kind because I am totally open to both, for very important reasons, but if you think that could help me improve somehow, I would like to know what you mean exactly.
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"..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."
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