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Piggle_humsy · Feb 17th, 2004, 03:57 AM

Yes Im drawn in... please give us more!

I have to put up with this from my sister when she writes stories in bits and runs them by me.. Im still waiting for one story she started about a year ago.. and hasn't finished yet!

Drives me mad! lol

So please don't leave us waiting that long red!

I really liked this bit

Quote:

I lay in a meadow, somewhere in a valley between mountains. The son was hot and bearing almost straight down, but I was stripped of my shirt and in my bare feet and felt way too much at peace with my surroundings to care about any discomfort. Occasionally, the wind swept by, and I felt like some kind of entity in an ocean of nature surrounding me and encircling me into its cycle. The wind was licking me like waves of this ocean as I lay there on the shore of solace.

I just like the detail and felt like I was right there and I could feel the slight breeze amongst the heat. Very Good!

Keep it comin'

Piggle

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