WoW! I am really into this man... I am most definitely gonna stay tuned to this one.. hardcore... You have like a lot of different elements mixing in here and it is some kick ass story telling....
i always really like your writing... so descriptive... and in this instance in particular you have an amazing amount of depth to detail that really puts me into the mood you are setting... the description of the face ritual itsef... goddamn man... i will be awaiting more...
favorite line: "I went straight to bed that evening at a reasonable time considering. I began my descent."
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