The Sword 4 Hire
The Sword 4 Hire
The light trembles on his skin While the shadow's greet him eagerly Rays reflected from the drawn blade It's edge as thin as thread Yet as deadly as the flames The flames that burn within him Concealed by the chain-linked armor Armor impenetrible to your thoughts Your wielded threats are reflected Never touching him Never confronting him Never again will you see him For you are down Gasping for the air that he left you Dim lights Dim hope Dim existence... ... Contract Fullfilled... |
Nice... that was cool. I liked how you describe the whole thing about the blade.
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Very cool and well written!
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Awesome poem S4H, couldnt have done any better myself!!! :laugh: peace bro!
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I liked this poem. I like how you convey the sword as an extention of the fire within him and vice versa. And then there's the impenetrable armor, both in a physical sense as well as an emotional sense, cuz this is definately a guy who is dedicated to his work and knows the difference between these things. So, basically you describe things really well for your audience to get all that. keep 'em coming!
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Thank you
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