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Ps2Fantasy under attack! ~Part 1~
Hmm..well, this is sorta similar to the other thread. The difference is that this is the real thing. The other was just like a sneak preview lol. Also, in this part, the ESS gets introduced.
AH! I had to cut some characters cuz I couldn't think of much dialogue. I also changed the story a bit. Again *Don't take anything personally okay* Well, hope you like it :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE CHARACTERS : Harry Fortune Mourdor Meryl SSsnake --------------- Hadoken 007 James Bond and me! ¤ Special Appearance: Rei!¤ .................................................. .................................................. .. ~INTRO~ -At a time when video gaming was at its peak, an unknown force know as the Master Cotton Ball Santas (MCBS) were on a mission. Their goal was to destroy every single elite video game community and replace it with Q-Tip shops. One by one strong forums feel until there was only one left. That forum was Ps2Fantasy. Soon. the Admins. and Mods. would have to send its attack squad to battle the MCBS. The question was, who would they send and would they survive.- .................................................. .................................................. .. **In the Master Room (MR)** Fortune : Harry, this fax just came via the windpipe. Harry: Hmm? What is it? *Harry takes the fax from Fortune and reads it aloud* Harry : Dear Ps2Fantasy Masters: This letter is of no friendly cause. It is a warning. As you may have noticed, the MCBS have already obliterated every single forum. Needless to say, you're next. You have a total of 2 days to send an attack squad of 3 cadets. Choose them wisely...or prepare to serve as our Q-Tip slaves! Mwuahahaha! *Harry crumples the paper with his hand* Harry: This is bad. Fortune: I'll say! They'll destroy all of my wallpapers! Harry: What? Fortune: Oh no...holy father of st. Nikolas! Harry:Fortune...you okay? *Fortune suddenly starts runnin around frantically with her arms in the air* Fortune: My surrealist wallpaper...oh holy mother of st. Macdonald! Harry: -.- ...Fortune stop! Fortune: Oh holy granpaw of st. taco bell! *Harry runs up and grabs Fortune by her arms* Harry: Fortune get a hold of yourself!! Fortune: Bu..bu..bu...but my works! I need to pray to holy st. banana so they'll be saved! Harry: Fortune! Fortune: *sigh* Sorry. So what'll we do? Harry: I don't know. Why don't we hold a meeting with our top Mods? Fortune: yes, good idea. Let's. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ **Over an intercom in the Mod. Lounge** Harry: Attention all Mods. in the rank -o, please report immediately to the MR. *Mourdor putting down his Pepsi* Mourdor: That's us. What do you think the matter is? SSSnake (Snake for short) : Huh? Bout what? *Mourdor shakes his head* Mourdor: Nothing, let's just go. Snake: Go where? Mourdor: Just follow me okay!! ----EXIT---- .................................................. .................................................. . *Meanwhile, Meryl, Harry and Fortune are already inside the MR* Meryl: What took you so long? Mourdor: Sorry. Snake : Long for what? Meryl: *ahem* Why are we here anyway? Mourdor: Yeah, what's up? Harry: Well, I'm sorry to inform you that we're to be attacked in 2 days. Mourdor: What! By whom?!? Harry: Some terrorists known as the Mater Cotton Ball Santas. Meryl:....What a name.... Harry: I know, but they are lethal. Snake: I thought we came here for doughnuts and tea! *Meryl glares at Snake* Snake: What! Harry: Anyway, we have to send an attack team of 3 cadets in 2 days. **Everyone suddenly smells smoke and they look around only to see Fortune kneeling down & praying to thousands of miniature statues with candles next to them** Fortune ( in the distance) : Oh holy uncle of st. Nicaragua...ohhh holy granmaw of st. mitochondria.... Snake: What's with Fortune? Harry: Err, don't mind her. Anyway, who will we send? Snake: Send where? Why? What's happening!! Mourdor *handing Snake a cookie* : Here, enjoy. Snake : Yippe! Now this is more like it!! Meryl:...Why don't we send him... Mourdor: Why don't we go! This is our home, we have to defend it!! Fortune *yells in the distance*: Save my wallpapers you fat Chihuahua! -Everyone else- : -_-;; Harry: Will you really do it! Mourdor: Yeah! Right Meryl? Meryl: ...I don't know. Mourdor: Why not? Meryl: Come on Mourdor. Think about it. If we go and get killed, there won't be any descent resistance left. Harry: You're right... Mourdor: ...But then who can we send? *Snake walks over to them after having finishing his cookie, ( Fortune stiil praying)* Snake: Can I have another? *Meryl whacks him on the head with a giant pand* Meryl: Will you stop! Snake: What!! Harry: Stop it you two! Mourdor: yeah, this is serious! Snake: What is? Meryl : Oh my... *Fortune suddenly stands up holding a rosary* Mourdor: You ok? Fortune....yes. I agree with Meryl. Harry: ..I thought you were praying... Snake: Who was praying? Fortune* handing Snake a whole box of Chips Ahoy*: here. Snake: Woo-hoo! Me like these lil meetings! Meryl: Someone please shoot him! Harry: *ahem* So who'se going? Mourdor: Should I look for the best members? Meryl: No, I propose we send the more useless members. Mourdor: What do you mean? MeryL Simple. If we send them 3 of our more slow-minded members, they'll serve as a distraction. Fortune: Yes. Then we can make a plan and attack them by surprise. Harry: Wow Fortune. You think greatly after praying huh? Fortune:...*whispers* holy father of st. ronald..... Meryl: So is it settled then? Mourdor: But do you think they'll go? Meryl: Of course they will. They're dumb. We'll just tell them they're our "special forces: and they'll jump to the mission. Mourdor: I guess so... Harry: But who will they be? Meryl: We need the most ludicrous, retarded, useless members... Fortune: Leave that to us Harry. Harry: So it's done. I expect your results at 19.542186465 hours. -Everyone- : Yes sir! Snake: HUH? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Out in the CR (computer room) Meryl: Look, I searched the lists and found these 3 loosers, er, "heroes". Fortune: Let me see. *goes and looks at the screen* Fortune: Ah! Excellent! Let us call them at once! Meryl :yes! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- **Meanwhile the phone rings at James Bond's (JB) kitche** JB: Yello! Fortune: JB? Is this you? Where you busy? JB(putting away his apron) : Uh...no. Fortune: Good. Anyway, I wanted to inform you that you have been chosen as an honorary member and have been admitted into the "Elite Special Squad". JB: Really! *jumps with joy* Fortune: Yes. Your presence is required at once. Come to the MR immediately. *hangs up* JB (feeling boastful): Well, I'm a very busy man...I'm not sure I can make it-Hello? Hello? Helloooo! ************************************************** * ¤At the same time the phone rings at Mena's shack¤ Mena: Hello? Meryl: Mena? Is this you? Mena: Yepperoni! Meryl: Oh, This is Meryl. Mena: Oh hi Meryl!! Wow! Let me compliment you on you work...blah blah blah.... Meryl:ZZzzz Mena: I too want to become a Poke-master! Meryl: what? Uh..Mena... Mena: And ketchup is good too!...huh? What? Meryl: Come to the MR in 1 hour. You have been selected to be in the "Elite Special Squad". Mena: Really!! Meryl: yes. Please hurry. *hangs up* Mena: Yay! I'm "special"!!! .................................................. .................................................. . *5 minutes later, the phone rings in Hadoken's restroom* Hadoken: Oh man, and I was letting it all out...ugh...*flush* Hadoken: Hello? Mourdor:...Hey Hadoken. Hadoken: Who'se this? Mourdor: It's me Mourdor. Hadoken: Whaddaya want?? Mourdor: Congrats. Hadoken: You saw me!! Every one gets diarrhea one time or another you know!! Mourdor: What? I was just going to tell you to come to the MR. Hadoken:.........Oh. Mourdor: Your great, uh "skills', have entittled you to a place in our "Elite Special Squad". Be here in an hour. *hangs up* Hadoken: At leat they recognize talent! Now I can go back to what I was doing... ************************************************ |
LMAO!!!:laugh:
i like this story! but err, diarrhea?! oh well. its hilarious! neways.. i have a phone next to my toilet? ewww, i dont wanna even think about that. lol |
hehe a very creative work Mena! Your story is fantastic :D
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:shock: This is pretty good Mena. You have my character almost exactly like me. Nice work. Put up the next part ASAP. ;)
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I like my character, and I like the others too!
hehehe That's really funny! Excellent work :laugh: |
heya mena, the next time you include more. i dont think you should change anything you've already written. it just feels strange. like when you read a novel, and then re-read it and find out some of the story has changed.
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All stories ever written have gone through re-writes. I feel that all the ones she made were for the better. I know have changed my whole story around about 1000 times.
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yeah, but i read her first one. then the re-written one. and it just feels weird when i read both of them. lol
oh well. its really no prob, but i just get that strange feeling.:roll: |
*smacks Hadoken on the head* You're such a numb nut! Didn't you read the part in which I stated that other story was like a rough draft. THIS one here is the first and official part of the story. Mourdor's right. I too think the changes were for the better. I had too many characters and their dialogue was dying.
Anyway, I'm glad you guys liked it :) I'll post up the next part really soon! |
riiiiggghhhhttt..... lol
neways, it doesnt really matter. i wanna know what happens!:D |
Why am i the idiot of the story i don't like that :mad:
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hey, what happened to me. I liked being a character. But now I'm gone. I feel so rejected.
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I like it, I want more, thanks for putting me it (cook) ha ha ha
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**heart shatters**
Hmph. Well, you know...I did ask that poeple not be offended. You're not the "idiot" of the story Snake, Hadoken is. And well, I saw I had too many characters and I didn't know what to put as the dialogue so I had to cut some. It seems as if you were offended, I'm sorry. Tell you what, I just won't write anything anymore. There, case settled. |
You should never stop writing. People are bound to get critisism from others. SSSnake doesn't like the way the character is. Big deal, it isn't his story, it's yours. You make it the way you want it to happen.
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I didn't mean stop writing in actuality, I meant this story. I thought you guys would find it at least entertaining. It's not like I meant anything in a bad way. The last thing I want is a misunderstanding. **ah! and after all that time I spent writing it*...........-.-
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aw, come on mena. you cant quit this story! My character was just at his 10% stupid level. you have to make him homer simpson stupid! lol
If sssnake doesnt want to be in the story, then i guess you could just change his name to someone who does want to take this part. any volunteers?;) |
hehehehehe !
very enjoyable and good and shiny and people shouldn't cry because they aren't in it etc ... tis but fun ! and fun it is for us to read . so be nice . |
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Anyways, don't listen to sssnake, he has a thing about his character always being cool. Lucky for him though, his character in my story is the main character, and he kicks ass! Anyway, keep the story going mena. You had an awesome idea and I think that you couyld really put it to it's full potential. I know that I'm enjoying it, and I'm sure everyone else is too. |
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