Deap Short Fast Poem -I made it
 

In the Darkness we shall pass,
we came together all at last,
as we thought to our past,
our days would never last,
so we passed,
to the end we could tell,
we were gone with heaven no hell

Yo. That's tight. I like that... alot. I'm still thinking about it.

I was thinking about people with relationships and abousive ones, where the husbands hit the wive and so on.....

I can imagine them saying that as they protested or something. Good job.

thanx I think thats the best poem I have ever done, I mean like just thought of it all fast and typed it up