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Sword 4 Hire

Jul 16th, 2002 05:39 PM

The Ninja...a poem by yours trully

The Ninja

by: DJ Sword Master Flash

What will you do when the Ninja comes?
Comes knocking on your door
Breaking your sense of solitude
Till the silence is no more

Will you let it in and befriend it
Leaving caution to the wind
Or will you lock it out in the cold
And never let it in

It will be your best friend
Making all your problems right
And you will trust it for the moment
Then let it finish you in the night

What will you do when your ninja comes?
Will you invite to take its coat?
And turn your back for a second’s worth
Until there’s a shuriken in your throat…

happy_doughnut

Jul 16th, 2002 05:49 PM

Wow, another amazing poem !
Man, I hafta say, I really like the way you write ! I'm glad you decided to write some more 'cuz it's really great !

I find the comparison to be so true. Well, at least it is to me.
Using a Ninja in it was quite clever.
*sniffle* Again, very well done :happy: .

kamari-ice

Jul 16th, 2002 06:01 PM

An acrostic poem, KOOL!

Beretta55

Jul 16th, 2002 06:41 PM

awsome poem!!!

Lost_myth

Jul 17th, 2002 12:11 AM

Indeed...

Ruby Moon

Jul 17th, 2002 03:39 PM

Bizarre choice for the subject, but nice work :)

Sword 4 Hire

Jul 17th, 2002 06:43 PM

You have to dig deeper into the poem...

...it's not really about a ninja....

Lost_myth

Jul 17th, 2002 10:59 PM

Seems like a friend that has betrayed you. Don't trust strangers or something. Good meaning. Yes, you did do a good job. Indeed.;) ;) I'm not saying it just say it either. I really mean it. My favorite is still OMG I wrote a poem tho. :happy:

Ruby Moon

Jul 18th, 2002 03:50 AM

Saying bizarre choice for the subject I didn't mean "A real ninja is a strange choice"... :mad: maybe you misunderstood the sense of my post. Next time I'll choose more carefully my words.

Sword 4 Hire

Jul 18th, 2002 04:01 PM

Well Soooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ;)

Yes it can be about friendship but I was talkin about love and how usually I'm the one hurt in the end...

Soul Angel

Jul 23rd, 2002 02:28 PM

That's a really good poem S4H :happy:
I liked it, keep it up! ;)

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