a poem for the new forums
 

self respect exists within principle only
so down and down and down we'll fall
again and again and again
and its not you its me again
depressed and left alone again

so one day we can die together
hold us still in time aghast
we'll deny them all
for the first time i'm alone

and self absorbed and broken up
and ruined and cursed and killed
and caught and perhaps
i needed you more than you needed me

and

i've heard all you can ever tell me

*wipes away tears*

I have something in my eyes, just a coincerdence thats all. :rolleyes:

Oh, nice poem.

Great poem Faile :) .

Yes, a wonderful poem.

Pretty Neat!
 

Thats A Pretty Neat Poem There .... ! Very Good! ;)

Great Poem Faile :)

That's a wonderful poem Faile!
I'd like to be able to write something like this, but my head is empty :(

That was nice, thank you for that enlightening piece of poetry, I liked it.

Good work, Faile.

thankyou for your kind comments-rah

Do you have anymore poems, I would like to see them, I will have to post up some of mine.

i have quite a few .

but i don't tend to post them, because i don't like them

Thats What U Think Faile. I Am Sure We Will Like Them As Much As We Liked All Ure Other Poems! :)

then you are too kind

But Faile your poems are really good!
You should post more up so we can all read them! :)

Oh Faile!
This is wonderful and moving poem!

You're so good at writing them!

maybe i shall then . or maybe not . depending on how much i despise them .

i don't know . the occasional line i like .

(why is it so hard to explain to people why i have no confidence in what i do)

anyway thankyou all .


and welcome back to pearl who we all thought had vanished for a while.

I am sure that yours are excellent, they are better that than mine, post more please.