A poem from me
I told you that I would here I go
As I plunged into the depths of the deep forgotten I turn around to take a look at the life I was leaving behind As I turn around I see nothing, no reason to stay, no hope So I turn around and start to walk, a tear drops from my eye, I continue to walk. I never turned around again that day. Then as I reach my final destination, I turn around to take a final look at the life of torment I was leaving, and I say you. You say no, I say I must, why you say, it was you, you were never there when I needed you. I then turn around and in the distance you scream no, as I take my final stemps into the deep forgotten I hope that you like it. |
007_JamesBond that was excellent!!!
I really liked it and all, it was really well done! :) I hope you'll be posting more of your work soon I can't wait to read more of your work you've done! :D |
yey ! more poetry !
very good |
Do you really like it???????
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Yes of course I really like it!
It is really well done ;) You should put more of your poems up for us to all read! :D |
I guess I am going to have to put a couple more up now. Ill put another one up by this week K
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Yay!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Can't wait to read it 007_JamesBond ;) :D |
Your too kind.
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Wow, great job. I had no idea that you had a talent in writing.
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There are alot of things that people do not know about me. My story that I am writting is on 7.5 pages long and still going.
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Say 007_JamesBond will you be posting your story on here?
I would like to read it! |
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And No, 007. It's not the Fidel Castro and Kinky one. |
I do not know if I will put up my story, in my story there is no real character development, it sort of keeps you guessing
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Very good poem 007 James Bond! I really liked it!
It's brief but good and nicely written! |
Thanks alot Rei.
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Nice!
Thats A Good Poetry!.! Should Be Named "Whenever I Turned Around".
Nice Work Double "O" 7! |
I think that I will name it that. good tittle
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