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trunks69420 Oct 27th, 2004 08:52 AM
track 18
 
Just some more things i just need to write...


What is life and where is it going?
Searching for the truth but it never shows itself
Wandering alone and in the dark
It would be so much easier without a broken heart
Stuck in a maze i cant find the way out of
is there such a thing as gods love?
I'm told there is but i cant find it
All i feel is rejection and hate
Everytime i wake up... is evertime i die
Pulled from the dream world where life is great
not perfect but better than here
I cant know what to think or where to go
Surrounded by tradgedy and shit
I'm stuck in this life trying to escape
i wont get out of it as easy as a gun
So i make what i can out of shit
Lost my love its forever gone
so i just continue to walk on.



okay.. that was really shitty... maybe i should stick to rhyming.. what i'm "good" at ..

tempted Oct 27th, 2004 01:28 PM
psst! head up ;)..and it's actually quite good..i've read better coming from you tough..well not better but different..happier :)..but you know what?!..if this helps you..ok i know it does so let it all out..:)

Faile Oct 29th, 2004 08:42 PM
I really like the title. It's nicely abstract and minimal. Nice work!

squirms_619 Oct 30th, 2004 08:26 AM
wow, I liked it, it was vary interesting.


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