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The Workings Of Il Palazzo
Well heres some of the stuff I'm writing for my band.
The Past Verse 1 (6 Lines) With So Much Time Gone I Wonder Who I Am I Wonder Where Where I've Been Before My Past Is In Thick Haze This Blanket Hides My Fears And I Continue On Without My Faith But Here I Stand So Very Alone Again Taking All I Have To Survive Pre-Chorus (4 Lines) Wake Me Up Keep Me Alive Please Stop My Demise I Will Live I Must Fight For What I Believe Is Right It Seems To Be The End For Me The End For Me.....! Chorus (3 Lines) Lying Awake Aware Of The Hate Believing This Cannot Be Fate Feeling Bound I Break Myself Down I Cannot Go On You Haunt Me Please Let Me Be It's The Past I Must Leave Verse 2 (6 Lines) As I Continue On Demons Tear Me Down Should I Throw It All Away Terror Takes My Dreams This Seems So Old To Me Why Do I Still Hold My Tears Do I Feel The Same Again The Way I Did Back Then How Do I Make This End Pre-Chorus (4 Lines) Wake Me Up Keep Me Alive Please Stop My Demise I Will Live I Must Fight For What I Believe Is Right It Seems To Be The End For Me The End For Me.....! Chorus (3 Lines) Lying Awake Aware Of The Hate Believing This Cannot Be Fate Feeling Bound I Break Myself Down I Cannot Go On You Haunt Me Please Let Me Be It's The Past I Must Leave Lead Guitar (6 Lines) Pre-Chorus (4 Lines) Wake Me Up Keep Me Alive Please Stop My Demise I Will Live I Must Fight For What I Believe Is Right It Seems To Be The End For Me The End For Me.....! Chorus (3 Lines) Lying Awake Aware Of The Hate Believing This Cannot Be Fate Feeling Bound I Break Myself Down I Cannot Go On You Haunt Me Please Let Me Be It's The Past I Must Leave End Another one I wrote for the girl that is the lead singer of our band. Had a dream one time and I put it down on paper. Verse 1 Time and Time Again I question what I feel About You........about you Are these feelings true Do you feel the same as I do What can I do....oh what can I do Do I Take My Strength and Pride Do I seal it all Inside And Try To Make you mine PreChorus Now with time growing short I reach the end alone, Please hear my final words, These words I hold for you Chorus Unfolding from my heart These emotions that I hide I can't believe i couldn't see you were the only one for me The only one for me Lying by you as we sleep Carefully watching you dream I can't believe I didn't see You are the only one for me The only one for me Repeat x1 Verse 2 I searched so long for somone Could you be the one Do I take the chance, the chance for your love Do you notice my feelings Does it even matter to you Will this friendship be over, if I wanna be with you All we do is like an eternity It means so much to me Why can't my dreams come true, oh please be with me PreChorus Now with time growing short I reach the end alone, Please hear my final words, These words I hold for you Chorus Unfolding from my heart These emotions that I hide I can't believe i couldn't see you were the only one for me The only one for me Lying by you as we sleep Carefully watching you dream I can't believe I didn't see You are the only one for me The only one for me Repeat x1 End And heres one I'm currently working on. This is too all my friends when we part ways for the future. Verse 1 Time has gone, oh so fast These memories will they last We've all been together for so long Sharing good times that will soon be gone Day to Day, Night to Night We dwell on the matter of leaving sight Will we be missed when we leave Is this the decision that must come to be Chorus So Now....... We all part Ways This hard feeling begs us to stay Do We...... Remember these times Oh Do I Keep Them Mine Verse 2 and the rest will come shortly. |
Yay you posted them in here...:) ... i loved The Past and The Dream i already told you that..but i like very much of this new one you're working on as well...so yep you're a very talented guy...no doubt about it...;)...it's just 2 bad that i can't listen to them...oh well maybe someday when you get famous i will...:)
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Now its come down to this To the day we will be missed Are we growing sad Why Does this Feel so Bad We say our last goodbyes These feelings are not lie Crying inside we need to shout Accept this decision and walk the route Chorus So Now We All Part Ways This Hard Feeling begs us to stay Do We Remember these times Oh Do I keep them Mine Repeat x1 End |
That's very good stuff man, will surely be cool material for interesting songs! It'd be nice to hear the actual result, as you're playing it with your band, but reading it's good too! :)
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Yeah heres another
Tell Me I don't wanna see your face I don't wanna be your dream Your voice is so much louder now Everything is torture to me All I did was stand my ground With my tired state Now I hold my pride up high Is this the way to make it by Chorus Tell Me.... That the writing on the wall will disappear Once I fade away Tell Me.... That this day is the only way To make my decision of you Verse 2 You acted like I didn't matter So why did I continue to bother Your feelings were not there Yet I continue to stare Is it true what I feel Is the mistake I'd take Now do I make the decision To keep you out of my vision Chorus Tell Me.... That the writing on the wall will disappear Once I fade away Tell Me.... That this day is the only way To make my decision of you Break Down Chorus Tell Me.... That the writing on the wall will disappear Once I fade away Tell Me.... That this day is the only way To make my decision of you Chorus Tell Me.... That the writing on the wall will disappear Once I fade away Tell Me.... That this day is the only way To make my decision of you End |
Ah, so Ian's song finally makes sence with the rest, very nice work. Can't wait to hear it.
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Heres a fresh one, straight from my heart
My Mistake Verse 1 I dreamed of the mistakes I made The mistake I made of you Torn Inside, and throw without These fucking feelings of my doubt Do I truely love you Is it something I just do My heart aches Knowing I hurt you Pre Chorus Continue to play the game Is that what is left I can try to seal the pain Oh my Lord what is next Chorus All I wanted was to touch your face.... ...and feel... ...you... This mistake I've made Has seperated me... ...from you... I know you don't feel for me But I sure feel for you I can't repress my feelings These tears are shed for you Verse 2 It hurts so much to think I can still feel my heart sink God this pain is so real What is the next thing I feel It Comes down to this The time I last see you I won't forget what we did The time I had with you Pre Chorus Continue to play the game Is that what is left I can try to seal the pain Oh my Lord what is next Chorus All I wanted was to touch your face.... ...and feel... ...you... This mistake I've made Has seperated me... ...from you... I know you don't feel for me But I sure feel for you I can't repress my feelings These tears are shed for you |
Really cool...i'm just sorry that you have to go thru all that to be able to write like this...i hope you feel better today..:)
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Another Work in Progess
Untitled so Far Short times call for large decisions Please make the choice with precision Haze fills the mind and takes the focus We travel blind and stumble with disgust Should we love the world for which we live Or give our promises and decide to give Things seem to always seem worse When we finally decide to travel a set course So far things are fine Will they stay in line Waiting for the day This just may Be the end of it all Of it all |
Heres another one. Most of this was originally written by the lead singer of our band but I added to it because it was little short.
Control Me Verse 1 Your Eyes Hold Something Unseen In Me I Cannot Fathom The Power You Hold To Control Me Do I Make Believe That This Is Really Me I Cannot Find The Soul In Me What Should It Be Chorus How Can You Love Me The Way That I Want Stare Unwavering With My Heart, In Disgust I Pray It Will Break But Maybe It Won't But I Can't Live Within Your Twisted Reality Verse 2 Your Smile Takes The Life From Me Is This What It Is Meant To Be Oh Am I Free What Is At Stake Is It My Life That You Will Take I Will Not Leave, I Will Not Go This Is The Love I Know Chorus How Can You Love Me The Way That I Want Stare Unwavering With My Heart, In Disgust I Pray It Will Break But Maybe It Won't But I Can't Live Within Your Twisted Reality Breakdown You Cannot Change Me You Cannot Tear Me Down And Hide Me In The Dark, Of Your Heart I Will Break Free Of This Fear And Leave Your Distorted Love Behind! Chorus (X2) How Can You Love Me The Way That I Want Stare Unwavering With My Heart, In Disgust I Pray It Will Break But Maybe It Won't But I Can't Live Within Your Twisted Reality Pretty much the second half of verse 1 and all of verse 2 is my doing. |
Some more..........
Living for Love I look back to see The Days Gone By How I longed for someone By My Side Holding On To The Past I Put On A Mask To Hide My Tears As I Cry PreChorus Is This The End Of My Sorrow Have I Found You My One And True Chorus Has It Ended Are You Truely Mine My Wings Have Taken Me So High Will We Last In This Tale We Started Please, Oh Please Give Us A Sign Love Is Me I Free My Past Giving Me My Freedom At Last Striving To Be Me I Look Towards The Sky Is It Something To Pass The Time Does This Have Meaning Or Am I In Doubt I Think I Will Give Give Into Love Prechorus v.2 This Is The End Of My Sorrow I Have Found You My One And True Chorus v.2 Is Has Ended You Are Truely Mine We Continue To Fly So High We Will Last In This Tale we Started Oh, I Have Recieved My Sign Love Is Me I Forget My Past Giving Me Freedom And Life At Last This is one is really depressing Verse 1 Give, Give Up The Fight Not Worth It, Mind Out Of Sight Take So Little Give It All Life So Spiteful See It All Chorus Take Me Fly Me Away I've Seen This Is My Way So Long To What I Am So Long To All I'll Be Verse 2 Is, Is This For Me Thinking It Has To Be Filled With Doubt Life So Dark I Tried To Stand And Now I Part Chorus Take Me Fly Me Away I've Seen This Is My Way So Long To What I Am So Long To All I'll Be Breakdown Looking Back At This I See What I Missed Lies Mistaken My Life Not Taken Should I Find A Way Chorus Take Me Fly Me Away I've Seen This Is My Way So Long To What I Am So Long To All I'll Be Heres Another Verse 1 Why Is It That We Hate Is It Somehow Connected To Fate Love Is Life, Love Is Hate Is It Real Or Is It Fake Do We Seek These Answers Are They Hard To Find Is This Life Just Our Lies Our Lies In Our Life Chorus Look Towards The Future Throw In, Step Out Don't Give, Look Up Savor What You Have And See It What It Is Will Lead You Because, Because Its True Verse 2 Continue To Smile Embrace Your Strength Inside We Are Not Weak And We Seek A Perfect Harmony, And To Stay Meek Live To Love, Extract Your Hate Live For Others And Don't Be Fake Time Is Short Use It Well Embrace The Way, A Way For Love Chorus Look Towards The Future Throw In, Step Out Don't Give, Look Up Savor What You Have And See It What It Is Will Lead You Because, Because Its True Breakdown Ooooooo, oooooooooo ooooooooooooo Chorus Look Towards The Future Throw In, Step Out Don't Give, Look Up Savor What You Have And See It What It Is Will Lead You Because, Because Its True |
Well i already told you i like them..so yeah..i do and a lot..especially the Living Love one (wich i now see you changed the name for Living For Love)..is just wow! :)...but i never read the second one..bad Will..you forgot to send me that one -_- and yes it is a bit depressing but i can't say that is something out of the normal coming from you..i mean looking at the others one can easily see you like to write about depressing issues..but good work nontheless..i'm a fan of yours you know that..lol
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Heres another incomplete work
I've Failed Again I Hoped For Something Great It Was Not Meant For Fate You Took From Me A Piece Of Me Please Leave Me Be The Tears I Hide I Will Not Cry Will I Be Fine Want Something So Great Never Being Fake Oh What Is At Stake PreChorus Will I Always Be Me Will This Never Change Doubt Rings In My Head Is My Love At End Chorus I Dared To Dream Of Love Something So Fine In Mind I Fall From The Skys Wind Silences My Cries Looking Down To See What Does Life Bring To Me Soaring From The Top I Beg The Pain To Stop Shouting For An End A Painful Misery Heartache Follows A Path Something Of Consistancy |
Uchiha Sasuke, the songs sound pretty cool. Keep up the good work.
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