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007_JamesBond May 25th, 2002 01:04 PM

something new from me
 
well I am sure that you have read my story, some of you have, but here is a poem from me that I just wrote


Pain

Through the eyes of time
It showed the world its power
but shrouded its gift behind the flames
for thee it proved to be a mere test

As I saw the one place I loved
slowly turn to ash and nothing more
As I watched my fallen house a feeling arose in me
something I feltun small but now fueled

It engulfed me, turning me into someone new
The hell I faced in my youth was petty compared to my new loss
The one person I vowed not to become slowly became me
my altered state was as if I was truly someone different

but only traped with in the confines of my own mind
as normal as I may seem, it is only a cover for the life
I truly live, a new found hate within my soul,
proves a horror of my life. The war I am at

is not a war with some foreign enemy or terror but one near
it is so close, it is in me, half of me is stopping the other from taking me over but it is loosing, my life is a plague to the world, and will only be stopped my heartless soul, one day the hell I live

will be over but that day is not in short

through the eyes of time it has shown
the world its pain but in me it stopped
and no matter how hard it tries
I will PREVAIL

Ruby Moon May 26th, 2002 09:44 AM

Is it about yourself or is it only fictional?
I find it really good and there's a lot of energy in it!

007_JamesBond May 26th, 2002 06:27 PM

yeah that is genuine, as much non fiction as I could

happy_doughnut May 26th, 2002 08:05 PM

Oh my goodness...
That is one of the greatest poems I have ever read!
Like Ruby said, it is filled with a lot of energy. It's a truly touching poem JB. I'm glad you're posting here again cuz you have this forum ruled :)
Really, it is a terriffic poem.

007_JamesBond May 27th, 2002 10:15 AM

All I really can say is Thank You, all i did was let my feelings go to paper, glad you like it

Indrid Cold Jun 11th, 2002 10:25 AM

Cool Poem 007_Jamesbond!

Hylas Jun 11th, 2002 02:21 PM

I thought you only liked to write stories! A good poem indeed!

007_JamesBond Jun 13th, 2002 01:03 PM

I tend to go where ever my mind takes me


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