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kamari-ice
Mar 1st, 2002, 06:02 PM
Hey this is a good chapter to a new and wonderful game.Tearing means to shed one tear.Okay.

The truth of the eye.The truth of the beholder.Journey to a fantastic world without imagination.

The ship takes off from the world Terra.Out to find another world of their own.Not remebering any that they left behind to suffer.They find a new and wonderful uncivilized world.The continents are spread out threw out.They land the ship, and notice that the uncivilized world, is really civilized.By the spirits of Gia, which will cause problems along their journey.Sara, the one true summoner, is the first out the ship.She notices that people were there before, ruins of tall buildings with their windows busted stand before her.The captain Zer looks all over the world Gia."What have we got here," he says.Sara says, "It looks like from our time when we left Terra." "Could you think the masters of kind could have died off." Zer says, "Whatever happens, we need to fix this place up, this is the only place we can live." Sara walks straight ahead in between the tall buildings.She hears something in the distance.She says "Zer it sounds like people whispering, Zer....Zer." She turns around and notices he is not there.She runs back to the ship to check for him.When she is in front of the ship she stops.A spirit comes out from the ground.She yells "Zer.....Zer." The spirit comes closer to Sara, but she just stands there looking at the spirit, she frozen in place.Right when the spirit almost gets closer to her, bullets are fired.

Uchiha Sasuke
Mar 1st, 2002, 06:11 PM
Hmm thats cool sounding.Make that up all yourself?

Faile
Mar 1st, 2002, 06:11 PM
i'm not sure tearing is a word .

it looks as if it is read a t-AIR-ring

whereas you refer to a word that would have to be read as t-EE-ring

kamari-ice
Mar 10th, 2002, 03:19 PM
Here is a reference. The girl is tearing, or shredding tears.

Faile
Mar 10th, 2002, 05:08 PM
should the word then be weeping ? or crying ?

kamari-ice
Mar 10th, 2002, 07:51 PM
No, cause everybody is Tearing.Its just a cool other word that nobody uses.Crying would be something obvious, it keeps the player wondering.

Soul Angel
Mar 11th, 2002, 05:19 PM
Hey that's pretty good Kamari
Very nicely done indeed
Keep it up! ;)