Uneasy!

[MakgSnake]

Well....This Is Another Song Of Mine. Which Has One Of The Best Tunes...Ive Ever Made. And Well The Guitar Is Done Great In It!

But This Song Has Been Written By Me And My Ex-Girlfriend. We Just Worked On The Lyrics!. And It Came Out Pretty Amazing!

Its Called "Uneasy"

-I Gave Up On This Barren Place-
-And I Looked My Fear Right In The Face-
-Hopless, As I Am Left To Be-
-Trying To Find What Has Broken Me-
-I Carry On In This Cold Breeze-
-That Has Got Me Crawling On My Knees-
-There No One Here To Lend A Hand-
-I Dont Know Where My Boat Will Land-

(Chorus)
-The Silence Rattles On My Brain-
-Reminding Me Of All My Pain-
-The Pain That Stings From Deep Inside-
-The Kind I Tried So Hard To Hide-

-I Learned Not To Trust Them With My Soul-
-Or I'd End Up In A Darker Hole-
-I Am A Victom Of Reality-
-Just Searching For Some Sympathy-
-Wallowing In A Pool Of Sorrow-
-Not Really Waiting For Tomorrow-
-So Full Of Hate, It Burns Inside-
-Everything Beautiful Withdrawed And Died-

-But Nothing Beautiful Could Ever Stay-
-Cause My Whole Life is Coloured Grey-

(Chorus)
-But I Guess I'll Just Wait For The Time-
-What I Heard, I Think Thats Not A Crime-
-See What Life And Soul Would Get For Me-
-I Can Make My Chance And My Destiny-

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Althought It May Sound All Sad And Full Or Sorrow, We Had GREAT Fun Time Writting And Working For This Song!.! She Really Did Help Me Alot On It!

[Pu the Owl]

Sorry, but I think it's funny you wrote this song with your ex-girlfriend and you also tell it was fun to write it with her..
I mean, it's funny considering the result!

Anyway, it's a nice song :)

[MakgSnake]

Well U See.....I Was Working On This Tune......And Was Singing It To Her.... Just Humming It With My Guitar And She Gave In The First Few Words......And....Then I Stopped And Continued It, While Writing It Down On The Paper. And Like That.......We Just Went On.......She Tried To Make Sense Of What was Coming Up And I Was Doing The Same!-!

It Did Turn Out To Be A Sad Song.....!.....And We Didn't Know What To Name It.....!......Then As I Sang It.....I Thought......The Words And Everything........They Are So Uneasy To Hear. So There U Go.... Came The Name!

Neways.....I Better Shut Up Now! :D But Seriously It Was Great Fun!.! Intresting I Would Say! :)

[Soul Angel]

Great song Makg!
Keep it up!

[Hylas]

Good song!
What genre of music goes along with it?
It's just my curiosity, but I'd like to know!

[007_JamesBond]

That is a nice song. do you have any others? works?

[MakgSnake]

Originally posted by Hylas
Good song!
What genre of music goes along with it?
It's just my curiosity, but I'd like to know!

Well.....I'd Say Its Slow Rock. Cause I Play Acoustic Guitar With It. And Gave In A Slow Rock Beat With The Help Of My Keyboard.

And 007, I Have Tons And Tons Of Songs! I Already Posted Lots Of Em Before The New Era Started. But I'll Post Some Here Too

Btw Thanks Guys For Liking It

[kamari-ice]

Well at least Makg has an ex.
ex-girlfriend

[007_JamesBond]

I can not wait. to see more