New Poem

[Female_Vivi]

May 10th 2002
Title: You

It was the day you finaly came
you offerd me an apologie and shame

I didn't care anymore, I had forgotten you
but no, you had to say more

It was not your fault, blame me you said
I thought, it's a little late for that!

All was said and you told me, I have to go
You left me with pain behind and you didin't even know

I'll admit, back then, we shure had fun
now it's over, said and done

Maybe a other time and place
then I will give you my hearth and a embrace

-x-

[IcyMourdor]

Nice job on the poem. I'm not into poetry much because i prefer novel type things(maybe I should start working on mine again), but it was still pretty good.

[Pu the Owl]

I liked this new poem! I'm so envious of your ability in using rhymes! I cannot use them because in my poems they always sound dumb hehehe

[Faile]

nice poem

[Mana]

Another good poem from Female_Vivi! :)

[Female_Vivi]

Haha, thanx

[Rei]

Very nice Vivi, you write very enjoyable poems :)