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Cannibal Clown
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:52 PM
I'm not a good song writer. Or a poet. But everything I've been writing lately has been kinda depressing and my friends think i'm suicidal or something. So I've decided to try something a bit different.

The joy I get
When you’re around
Your face, your voice
And all you do

Just me and you
All alone
Could this be real?
A love that’s true.

You are as perfect
And as frail
As you were
Since day of birth.

But I know I’m not
Worthy of you
The greatest creation
Put on this earth.

Life is not worth living, unless my life has you.
But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart.
So many things to say to the angel of my life,
To confess all my love, where do I have to start?

Let me take you
By the hand
And show you what
Your life could be.

Take that step
Take that chance
And spend the perfect
Night with me.

With you my life
Is like a dream,
The light that captures
All your grace.

Life is not worth living, unless my life has you.
But too shy to express, the thoughts in my heart.
So many things to say to the angel of my life,
To confess all my love, where do I have to start?


It's not about an actual person. I'm not lucky enough to have someone that means that much to me in my life. It's just a couple of words i put on paper.

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:58 PM
That is awsome man, nice song. I think that subconciously it is about some one, but anyway. NICE.

Reid
Jan 27th, 2002, 01:15 PM
Good job, that might sound good sung with an acoustic guitar or something?

Or without the second chorus it'd be a good poem.

Soul Angel
Jan 27th, 2002, 01:31 PM
That's a really good song Cannibal!
I think it is about someone and is really well done!

Keep it up ;)

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 01:34 PM
See told you Cannibal we think that it is about someone.

Faile
Jan 27th, 2002, 03:55 PM
its very good .

its ok to feel down somedays . really

MakgSnake
Jan 27th, 2002, 04:19 PM
Well Ive Been Making Alot Of Songs and I Have To Tell U That, ........ This Song Of Ures Can Become A Beautiful "SONG" If Music Is Added To It.!. Its Really Really Nice Cannibal!.! I Didn't Know U Were This Good!.! Trust Me!

IcyMourdor
Jan 29th, 2002, 09:12 PM
Originally posted by 007_JamesBond
See told you Cannibal we think that it is about someone.

Come on, Jeff. You and I both know who he is mentioning so you don't have to bother him. You know how touchy he gets when we talk about it.

Anyways, great song CC. It actually reminded me of someone when I was reading it.

Cannibal Clown
Jan 30th, 2002, 09:48 PM
Originally posted by Mourdor


You and I both know who he is mentioning so you don't have to bother him.
Anyways, great song CC. It actually reminded me of someone when I was reading it.

I know who you think I'm talking about and trust me, it's not her. I'm not lucky enough to even have a chance with a relationship with anyone. Yet alone someone like her.

Besides, the song is way too deep and full of heart for it to be about an actual person. And I know she doesn't feel nearly as strongly about me as I do for her. So it's a dead end relationship from the start.

Uchiha Sasuke
Jan 30th, 2002, 10:47 PM
[b]Nice song really it is.But on the topic of writing songs about people.The girl i desire is the inspiration to all my songs/b]

Indrid Cold
Jun 9th, 2002, 09:29 PM
Cool...
But i have no idea what that Song is...

I only know
Most

1.Metal Rock
2.Hard Rock

happy_doughnut
Jun 9th, 2002, 09:35 PM
... That... is beautiful CC. It really is. I would have never imagined you had such great talent! Honestly, that is an extremly well written song. Very sentimental... completely lovely *smiles*